Maine tumse pyar kiya hai
esliye eqrar kiya hai
ye dard kaisa utha hai dil me
kya ye pyar ki saza hai
pyar t0 ek ehsas hai jise dekha nai jata chhua nai jata
kaise batau ki ab tumhare bina mujse raha nai jata
tum d0or h0 mujse es kadar
jaise d0or hai ek d0osre se aakas or sagar
en d0orio me ye pyar na h0ga kam
ab ek duje se kabi juda na h0nge hum
dekh0 ye jami ye nadi ye ambar
puch0 ense
kyu has rahe hai ye hum par
zara dekh0 ye diye
kyu hai ye bujhe se
kyu puch rahe hai ek duje se
ki hum d0or kyu hai ek duje se
hawa bhi hai s0e c
nadi bhi hai sahmi c
tumhare bina zindgi me kuch t0 hai kami c
en d0orio k0 mitao na zara muskura k pass t0 aao na. . . . .
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.ye lines maine khud likhi hai but mujhe ye samaj nai aa ra hai ki ye line achi hai ya nai
so plz help me yar !!!! Or haan agar k0e kami h0 t0 w0 b dil kh0l kar batana . . .
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- Supriya
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13 comments:
nice yar
seriouslly nice
it jst mind blastng if u really write..
seriously..!!!!
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gud
vryyy nice lines pooja...................suits 2 me alsoooooooo...............superlyk....
♥·٠•●pUnEeT●•٠·♥
vry nice linessss...pooja...........suits 2 me also....superlyk...
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hey!!!
its nice shayri.... but last ki 2-3 line dubara soch kar kuch or likho to ye mind belowing ho jayegi............. sorry bura lage to but its true..... ok shupriya tc. or aise hi likhte rehna.....
nice one yar
i lke it bt mujhe lagat h pyar v chij h jo sab kuch bhula dethi h
Very Nice.........
I Like it...........
ultimate ;)
apne bhut achi lines likhi h i like your lines yaar i m pooja
m ne b apni story is site pe likhi h my real story k naam se apki lines pyar krne walo ke liye banai gai h kafi achi h likhte rehna
i think 8th raw changed if u like.
jaise dur ho sahil se sagar
aur last wali line ko aur prepare karo.
anant
superb, mind blowing..
Gud luck 4new 1
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